WELCOME!

I’m Amelia, a freelance developmental editor for KidLit authors.

I love stories that spark wonder and curiosity in young readers. As a developmental editor, I can help you tighten plot, refine character arcs, and hone your distinctive voice. Together, we can give your story wings to fly!

  • “Amelia zeroed in on the most important elements of my story and quickly grasped what I was trying to accomplish. She asked clarifying questions to fine-tune her critique. And she wrote me an insightful, encouraging editorial letter that will make my submission package shine.”

    Amanda Coppedge

  • “[Amelia] covered everything so comprehensively. [Her] overarching edit letter was clearly thought out and provided ample detail about the overall submission package and underscored suggested changes. [Her] synopsis and first chapter edits were perfect for my story, and then [her] query edits surpassed that again.”

    Sarah White

  • “The editorial letter that [Amelia] sent was full of instruction and guidance that I really needed as a first-time author. I appreciate [her] directness and honesty. Also thankful for [her] quick responses and the opportunity to video chat with [her]—very helpful.”

    Stacie

  • "You were very communicative and clear on next steps . . . your thorough structure outline and suggestions were very helpful. It was very clear, and made me go, ‘Oh, of course!’ when you pointed things out.”"

    Marcie Atkins

  • “I appreciate how [Amelia] bring[s] everything back to the reader: to engaging them in the story, helping them connect with the character, and meeting their expectations in the genre . . . and [she's] given excellent actionable advice on how to get readers more invested.”

    Michelle Sanchez

  • “Your suggestions were super helpful, and your overall tone was enthusiastic and encouraging. In this tough business, it's so great to hear positive feedback.”

    Amanda Coppedge

  • "Having worked with a variety of editors over the time I've been writing, I don't think I've ever worked with someone who was able to take what I provided and understood it so well that every piece of feedback was entirely relevant, and every suggestion fit in with the narrative arc of the story.”

    Sarah White

  • “The breadth of your edits, your familiarity with the manuscript, and the consideration you gave to presenting editorial feedback and options far exceeded my expectations.”

    Michelle Sanchez

Basic Edit: Manuscript Assessment package

Basic Edit:
Manuscript Assessment

  • Need general feedback and guidance on revision? Try my basic editing package: a beta-style critique + manuscript consultation.

  • I'll read your manuscript once and give broad-stroke comments in a one-page revision letter. If you enlist me for further editorial services for the same manuscript within one year, I will reduce the subsequent package by 15%.

  • Rate: .0075¢ per word
    (E.g., 80,000 words = $600)

Intermediate Edit: Manuscript Critique

Intermediate Edit:
Manuscript Critique

  • Finished a draft and ready for a round of focused edits? Try this intermediate package.

  • I'll read your manuscript twice. During my first pass, I'll immerse myself in the story. During the second pass, I'll examine each main story element (plot, characters, voice, setting, etc.) and make a moderate amount of comments in the margins. Then I'll organize my notes into an editorial letter (3–5 pages).

  • Rate: .015¢ per word
    E.g., 80,000 words = $1,200

Advanced Edit: Full Developmental Edit

  • Ready to take your manuscript to the next level? Dive in deep with this advanced editing package.

  • I'll read your manuscript twice, examine each main story element, and make an ample amount of comments in the margins. Then, I'll compose an editorial letter (7–10 pages), which will include digital resources for strengthening the manuscript. Last, I'll offer a brainstorming session via Zoom for tackling your next round of revisions.

  • Rate: .03¢ per word
    E.g., 80,000 words = $2,400

Advanced Edit:
Full Developmental Edit

Picture Book Package

Picture Book Package

  • Need feedback on your picture book?

  • I'll read your story three times, make suggestions in the margins, perform line edits, and compose an editorial letter (2–4 pages).

  • $100 Flat Rate

Submission Package

Submission Package

  • Preparing to go on submission with agents?

  • I'll offer developmental and line edits for your query letter, a plot analysis for your one-page synopsis, and a revision letter and line edits for your first chapter (up to 20 pp).

  • $200 Flat Rate

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Image Credits:
Hummingbird: © MIGARTdesign via Canva
Mountains: © Dervik via Canva
Sun: © Syifa Khusna Amalia via Canva
Birds of Prey: © MitrushovaArt via Creative Market
Photo Credit: © Matt Ross Photography